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I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
I hope my intent is clear
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LLA69qHa8bQmdCtgm4R1IR0FpU7Iys1Z/view?usp=sharing

Here's version 2. It adds up now but the rhythm isn't quite right. It doesn't swing.

I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)

Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LLA69qHa8bQmdCtgm4R1IR0FpU7Iys1Z/view?usp=sharing

Here's version 2. It adds up now but the rhythm isn't quite right. It doesn't swing.

I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

[![12 bar blues][1]][1]

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
I hope my intent is clear
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LLA69qHa8bQmdCtgm4R1IR0FpU7Iys1Z/view?usp=sharing [1]: https://i.sstatic.net/HKmPp.png

I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
I hope my intent is clear
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LLA69qHa8bQmdCtgm4R1IR0FpU7Iys1Z/view?usp=sharing

Here's version 2. It adds up now but the rhythm isn't quite right. It doesn't swing.

I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
I hope my intent is clear
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):

[![12 bar blues][1]][1]

but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
I hope my intent is clear
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?

Audio: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LLA69qHa8bQmdCtgm4R1IR0FpU7Iys1Z/view?usp=sharing [1]: https://i.sstatic.net/HKmPp.png