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Not knowing your intended rhythm, I'd bet your dotted sixteenth notes are incorrect; these demand thirty-second notes, which result in a "more correct" notation of the following, which I can't imagine is what you intended:

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One possible "fix" is to replace the first dotted sixteenth with an eighth and remove the dot from the second dotted sixteenth, but again, withoutAfter hearing ityour recording, thisyour intended rhythm is just a wild guess towards one possibility:

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So as it turns out, your rhythm is actually correct—at least, once you remove the dots!

Otherwise, I'd recommend re-spelling the chord to include a B♭ instead of an A♯. This note is the seventh of the chord, and since the root is C, we prefer to spell it as the note a seventh above BC (that is, some kind of B) as opposed to some kind of A.

Not knowing your intended rhythm, I'd bet your dotted sixteenth notes are incorrect; these result in a "more correct" notation of the following, which I can't imagine is what you intended:

enter image description here

One possible "fix" is to replace the first dotted sixteenth with an eighth and remove the dot from the second dotted sixteenth, but again, without hearing it, this is just a wild guess towards one possibility:

enter image description here

Otherwise, I'd recommend re-spelling the chord to include a B♭ instead of an A♯. This note is the seventh of the chord, and since the root is C, we prefer to spell it as the note a seventh above B (that is, some kind of B) as opposed to some kind of A.

Not knowing your intended rhythm, I'd bet your dotted sixteenth notes are incorrect; these demand thirty-second notes, which result in a "more correct" notation of the following, which I can't imagine is what you intended:

enter image description here

After hearing your recording, your intended rhythm is:

enter image description here

So as it turns out, your rhythm is actually correct—at least, once you remove the dots!

Otherwise, I'd recommend re-spelling the chord to include a B♭ instead of an A♯. This note is the seventh of the chord, and since the root is C, we prefer to spell it as the note a seventh above C (that is, some kind of B) as opposed to some kind of A.

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Richard
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Not knowing your intended rhythm, I'd bet your dotted sixteenth notes are incorrect; these result in a "more correct" notation of the following, which I can't imagine is what you intended:

enter image description here

One possible "fix" is to replace the first dotted sixteenth with an eighth and remove the dot from the second dotted sixteenth, but again, without hearing it, this is just a wild guess towards one possibility:

enter image description here

Otherwise, I'd recommend re-spelling the chord to include a B♭ instead of an A♯. This note is the seventh of the chord, and since the root is C, we prefer to spell it as the note a seventh above B (that is, some kind of B) as opposed to some kind of A.