I'm trying to put a 12 bar blues to paper but the notes don't add up. It will be C/F/G and I have the rhythm like so (just the C here):
but something isn't right (and what's more, my baby done left me!)
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong? Wrong time signature?
Here's version 2. It adds up now but the rhythm isn't quite right. It doesn't swing.