EDIT: The questions below still apply, but here is an updated edit that I think looks a lot cleaner. Any thoughts?
Regarding this piece with a 3+3+2 rhythm, I have a few more questions regarding notation. The measures in question start at 1:09 in this video: Aquatic Ruin Zone
- Measure 60: I grouped the left hand in three groups that reflect this rhythm, and the center beat 3 is still visible due to the split voices. Is this notation more easily readable than the notation in measure 62?
- Measure 61: has a total of 3 voices. Is this notation acceptable? Would it be better to add the red EFG to the left hand?
- Measures 64-66: Would you suggest any kind of rebeaming of the eighth notes here? Or any other kind of change in notation?