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So in this passage (for piano) I have a pianissimo part in the right hand that follows the left hand. I want the pianist to treat the notes in the right hand 'like distant resonance' (or something like that), although I'm not sure the appropriate place in the score to put the words.

If above the treble clef (as it is in the picture), would that not appear to be describing for both the treble and bass clefs? Should I use an asterisk and explain it separately?

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Your picture is correct. If you wanted the dynamic mark to apply to both hands, it should go in between the staves, not above the top staff.

There is nothing wrong with adding text such as "like a distant resonance" if it helps to explain the effect you want.

Actually, there are a couple of other things "wrong" with your picture:

  1. The 8va sign should only extend over the notes, not over the rests. In fact, do you really need the 8va at all here? Don't worry that you might need to increase the vertical spacing between the staves and systems to fit everything in!
  2. The F# and G# on the bottom staff look bad, and the note spacing almost suggests they are played as two consecutive 8th-notes, not together. Either flip the stems so the top note is stem up and the bottom note is stem down, or nudge the G# as far left as you can without colliding with the F# flag. If your "crossed stems" on these notes are meant to indicate the voice leading, you might consider whether anyone will be able to hear that fact - remember music is meant for the ears, not for the eyes!
  • Excellent points about correct representation of the sharped eighth notes. I might put all three quarters (in the same triplet) on one stem as well. – Carl Witthoft Aug 14 '18 at 12:07
  • @CarlWitthoft I assumed there was some reason why the OP had split ba1 2 bottom staff into two "voices" with separate stems - that's irrelevant to the OP's question about dynamics, and without more context there's nothing to indicate whether it is "good" or "poor" notation. – user19146 Aug 14 '18 at 13:28
  • Agreed with the points here: LH doesn’t need to have multiple voices on that staff. – jjmusicnotes Aug 14 '18 at 16:25
  • Further to the above notational points: there is something wrong with the end of that bar: a minim/half-note's worth of music in the upper stave is above a semibreve/whole rest in the lower. Perhaps that rest should be a minim/half? – Rosie F Sep 23 '18 at 12:32

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