I'm conflicted. I have this passage (note: tuning = DADGBE, D2 notated as D2):  First, this is incorrect, as I'm not including the three beat rest in the third bar for the second-from-the-top voice, because it would be needlessly busy to read (you could fit it in that little space under the C#?). At the same time, this isn't meant to be contrapuntal, so having such complex rhythms baked in seems like too much. My second suggestion is this following one, with a mononophonic melody line, with some L.V. markings to indicate the rung notes. I would imagine this is preferrable and 'more idiomatic', but I'd like some feedback. 