Your lyrics are written like a prosa text, the only phrasing I can recognize are the commas.
I can feel a rhythm ... are there rhymes?
Notate it in the form of a poem: verse lines, strophes.
Write dots and dashes underlining short and long syllables.
Mark slashes (pseudo-bar-lines) ahead the accentuated words.
You don’t need to notate the exact rhythm in ...